Need Feedback for Low-Poly Dam

Hey guys! I was bored so I made this quick low-poly dam, fully in studio with no f3x nor blender. FYI, it took me about 3-5 hours to make this. The style I’m going after is a somewhat industrial, low-poly-ish kind of thing. Feel free to attack me in the comments lol

(sorry if it is grainy)

Once again, don’t hesitate to give me feedback, I’m pretty willing to improve.

Quick Edit: Added another angle to show the jeep a bit better


Thanks :slight_smile:

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It’s pretty good but the water and overall structure needs some improvements: removing that big patch of high level standing in the water could improve the overall feel. I’ll attach an image to get a better understanding on what I’m talking about.

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Protective walls

I feel like adding those protective straight walls placed in the middle of the water could improve it as in the real world they normally have the water flow through a protective wall so all the flowing water coming out of the walls won’t make a big mess all over the place.

I think what you have now is great. Try using reference images to get those small important objects I feel like your build is missing a handful of things that need to be added, I’ll attach an image above so you could get an better understanding on what the protective lines are.