I made this today I need some feedback to improve using blender.
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This is in the wrong category. Post this is #help-and-feedback:art-support
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No, this is a feedback on the render he did above. This isn’t a building support as he most likely did not build this.
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I changed it to art support, sorry.
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Hi! I am a GFX artist myself so I believe I might have some good suggestions.
I don’t generally make rendered scenes like this, but I think I can help.
First off, I don’t use blender, but I use Cinema 4D instead. I’m guessing you use some sort of Lightroom. (Correct me if I’m wrong). I don’t think your Lightroom is really that good, as the lighting looks really off. For some reason, the shadows look odd to me as well. There’s also no textures in the photo. The cars should be reflective, the wall should have a texture such as bricks or concrete. The driveway should also have a texture.
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Hello, I’m not a GFX artist but I am an artist so I know a few things when it comes to looks and unity in an art piece.
I’ve noticed someone else mention the shadow looking off, which I can agree to. The pile of money seems to be the light source, with that being said, all shadows should be casted based off of that light source. The light source in the GFX currently appears to be up higher this casting a shadow more downwards (which does make the shadow look off) so i recommend adjusting that 
Other than that looks alright to me! Hope this helps!
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