Feedback on this low-poly build
sorry that my cursor is in this one…
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Hmm… To be Honest, it Looks good! Keep up your work!
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thanks it means a lot I, do you know how I could make a portfolio lol I just got to member and it wont let me?
It’s looking awesome so far! The only thing I think is that it’s too empty.
thank you, what should I add lol
Looks great, but maybe you can add some vegetation, like grass or flowers, & maybe a couple more trees. But still looks cool!
Nice work. 
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Probably a bobbing boat… some water critters, more trees, etc
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Hmm Also I was thinking of adding some frogs.
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I think it looks great! Maybe add a bit of overhang on grass parts. Also, I love the particles! Keep up the good work!
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thank you I will do that, I did on the terrain around the water but not on the surrounding terrain.
It looks okay, it needs more detail and I don’t appreciate the blocky style, it needs to be more “rounded” I also feel that the river should be less symmetrical. Maybe try adding extra trees, getting rid of the sun-rays, and also re-designing the layout of the house to make it look more modern, or at-least something that fits the context a little more.
ok thank you for your feedback
This looks great! I would recommend adding rocks and trees.
ok guys I made some updates and updated the photos
There’s not much I can say you can improve on, honestly. It’s an awesome build overall. My only nitpick is the sun rays. I don’t usually like really strong and bright sun rays, since it often is distracting and can take away from your build. You could maybe lessen it a bit.
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ok thank you very much, i will fix it.
Hey there it looks good and has details but I think you could add more details to it by adding more rocks, flowers, maybe even realistic grass and you could probably add more npc’s it still looks cool thought, Good job and I hope your showcase becomes popular!
thank you so much, but its not for a game, its just for showcase
Oh my bad sorry there.
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There isn’t much to change, it’s looks great. The only thing I would add is maybe more rocks and maybe grass. I also suggest changing the lighting to match more of a cartoon style. (Exposure, brightness, contrast, etc.)