Hello! I have recently made a showcase game (not too long ago) and I’d like some feedback on what I should improve, feel free to hit me with feedback or criticism as that would be greatly appreciated!
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Here is the game if you want to see more!
I love it so far, keep up the great work! I would just expand on the little details, add more items that may make the walls empty. Add detail to surfaces, this could include a laptop on the bedroom table.
Scale the doors down to be more in proportion with the player, needs more detail to the walls (outlets, skirtings). Overall the entire build looks very plain and simple, if that’s the style you’re looking for then it seems good to me. Although I would go into detail on the chairs and the entire build. The layout seems rather underwhelming for a house as well, you probably want a corridor to buffer between the entrance door and the rest of the house.
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I really like the concept though, could probably make for an interesting game if you wish to make it as such.
The furniture in there looks great and I like how your avatar (or Humanoid) can be seen from above, just to see what is happening around you.
I also would like to say that the game itself is actually good! So, keep up the good work man!
Hi. Your map is completely awesome! The graphic and setting looks great. But maybe it would be better if you make the control a bit easier! I think you are a great creator.
Lighting looks good, however you could add a few details in to make the place look less empty, i.e some furniture and decoration. Otherwise, it looks great!
The use of lighting, particles and music gives your game a very relaxing feeling.
One thing I would suggest changing is somethings can be a little big compared to the player, like the door for example.
Personally I’d use dummies or load character to scale buildings to a player.
Very interesting concept with the camera angel and use of particles to express light looks so pretty!!
Think the next part is to focus on the little details about the room like for example is with the kitchen, adding cups,plates and other objects you would see in the kitchen area
Another thing to add is the layout, the house feels like one big box, add corridors and walls to cut of parts of the house with walls. By this will make it feel more cosy and get that home like feel
Overall its a good start! Just need that push to make it a fully detailed showcase 
It looks too detailed and amazing. I would like that in image 3 it has a little more decoration so that in some parts it do not look empty. Good job
This looks like classic 2013 roblox and I appreciate that. Amazing work on the house and I hope to see more in the future. You earned yourself a bookmark my dude.
