hi I finished my first sci-fi armor I think it looks good, but I could always get feedback
here are the images of the armor
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Is a weapon included in the scifi armor? I think the armor is pretty good, I like the detail with the helmet and how it has the antenna.
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no it’s just the suit it’s for a puzzle game
well it looks pretty good you did a good job designing the armor it shows but it would look better if it included a gun in general you did a good job😀
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Ok thank you for your advice maybe i should add a weapon for some segments of the game because that sounds like a really good idea
thank you.
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This looks really cool! As said before, you should add a weapon. Keep up the good work!
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Your armor set looks very detailed.
Maybe you could possibly add a sword to your armor set.
Overall it looks great.
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I think the armor set looks great! It’s well detailed and looks good. Nice work! 
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It looks great, but I would recommend changing the neon to a more complementing color (you could shade the red to be duller or lighter) and make it a little transparent so the glow effect isn’t so strong.
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I think that a light blue would look nicer than the red, my opinion though.
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Before I address anything, I just want to say the armor looks really good so far! I like what you did with the neon red and black theme.
According to the third image, the backpack looks a bit too bright and it practically colors the entire back torso red. You can try decreasing the sizes of the parts and/or change the bloom effect (if you have one enabled).
Another thing is that, apart from the front, the helmet needs more of the red neon. Because from the back, it looks a little odd being just black.
Other than that, the armor looks real sci fi! Good luck on your project 
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Ok, I finally added the weapon it took me a while but I’ve done it now.
1st version of the gun
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I decided that the gun was much too blocky so I changed it in the second editing.
I’m happy with how the guns turned out.
Ok I’ve done just that I made the changes you suggested and it looks way better now.
Ok, I was a bit unsure about this so I copied the armor and made it blue and I think it looks quite good so thank you for the idea.
I didn’t see much purpose in this one but It sounded like something fun to make, also I was going for a knight design as well as the sci-fi design.
Anyway, thank you, everyone, for your kind feedback it helps me build games.
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Tone down the neon in the back?