So basically, I wanted to do my first Roblox ad for my friend, I completed it today. But I don’t feel this is the best thing that I can do, I want to get some feedback or rating, thanks.
That’s really good! I like it a lot
Awesome poses, great use of text that captures the audience’s eyes, and balanced slanted bars: this made the GFX ad accurate, well done!
The first sentence isn’t grammatically correct, it should be “rain hell upon your enemies”. Also, the second sentence is missing a “the”.
The only other main thing is the slants get a bit repetitive, try flipping the middle one so it slants downwards to the right rather than upwards, it should add a bit of variation and help draw the eye.
I didnt make the text, anyways thanks for feedback.
Well excecuted, and I like the details; will definitely attract visitors. However, it looks like the stereotypical ROBLOX Ad, if you want to attract more people, you might want to pursue other creative options.
The layout is good, I would focus more on improve your characters since they are the main focus of the ad. Try and create more realistic materials for the hats by adding a simple normal map which will give a fabric look. Also try adding folds and creases to the clothes, there are lots of tutorials out there.
I love this idea and I would love to hire you for my group D&R.