Need feedback on my game

There is the game I want feedback on:

I have been working on it for some time and recently published it. Any sort of feedback is appreciated.

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I don’t really like this game, it’s litterally just a replica off of many other games on and off Roblox

I personally feel loke this whole idea/concept has other games that have done it before and have done it much better than you.

You can try to improve the UI a little bit, making it a little more creative and not just black with white text


Also your avatar…


The can also use developer products for donations so people can donate multiple times

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I respect your opinion however pretty much all Roblox games are replicas of other ones. And the games which I took inspiration from. I recommend you play them also are generally the same computer text.

For the dev products. If you’d have read the description of them, I explain how you can donate multiple times by just removing them from your inventory

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Small bag: in suggestion letter the you can not use more than 85 letters but it says 100.
I like the style, I would like to see little quests around room(Like check under the bed, open the closet and etc.)

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Might work some of those quests into the game. Thanks for the feedback

Thanks for the ringing in my ears after that random loud scream.

There was some grammar mistakes and c’mon a part were I have to gamble for my life with math.random?

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Sorry for the loud sounds. I should put a volume disclaimer too, and I will try to find the grammar mistakes. I know there’s a lot