Hey i am currently working on a game and would like some feedback on it what could be improved and if the game has potential and if i should Advertise it with roblox ad manager for 50-100$? and Which thumbnail you like the best thanks.
Untitled Zombie Game [ALPHA] - Roblox
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(Thumbnail 3 is obviously AI)
I wouldn’t recommend using AI thumbnails. People usually lower their expectations when they see an AI generated image.
First of all, the objects that can be placed down on your plot of land don’t really align very good with each other. At least the conveyors do, tho. Try to fit every object so that the take up exactly 1 unit of space.
For example, try making the seller and dropper as wide as the conveyor.
Secondly, you should make it clear what mode you are in, because some people could forget and accidentally remove objects by moving their camera around using right click.
Objects didn’t disappear when the plot is supposedly empty.
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Thanks for the feedback. Do you like the first thumbnail or the second thumbnail more? Or should i just make a new one.
Do you think the game has potential or is the game loop too boring?
The thumbnails don’t really convey what happens in the game. I would make a thumbnail that is like “rock → zombie” but with pictures. A nicely made tycoon would be my 2nd thumbnail.
Anyway, the game could be good if you added some flashy effects for whenever you hatch a zombie or something.
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