Need feedback on my horror game

Hello, everyone.
I was working on this small horror game called “Midnight” and I need feedback.
The game is playable, however, I do not know if it is good.
Please give me feedback about how you feel about GUI design, sounds, map, and others.
Thank you for your help!

[ I plan on adding chapters later, for now, it’s just a demo map ]

Link:
Midnight Demo

The game should take around 5 - 15 minutes to beat.
Edit: After finishing all objectives get to the car. I forgot to add it to the objectives :frowning:

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can you send a few screenshots :slightly_smiling_face:

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Sure! Let me open the game really quick :smiley:

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You should disable shift lock and add a invisible barrier so you can’t get on the car

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Roblox grass is out of place here, consider using a different variant just for this title screen
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This is a concerning amount of assets, however I normally stray away from using any so I can’t judge
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You should disable that core gui

I can’t say there is anything interesting or creative it’s just your average, slowly walk away from a stock avatar, scary noise plays oh no.

The GUI doesn’t seam fitting and doesn’t merge with the screen in any way making it quite jarring.
Also the fact that this says “free” is very disconcerting, why is it payed for, why is there a donate button? If your doing roblox horror for the money then you shouldn’t be in it at all I say. But that’s just me being a downer, there is a reason why I’ve never finished making a roblox horror game.

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