Need help designing this gift shop

I dont know many things to add to this gift shop and my friend who helps me make it isnt online right now and i want to get this done today so what can i add to it?

Here are the pictures of how it looks so far.




Dont mind the lights sticking out the roof like that that will be fixed later.

So what can i add onto this?

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I think it’d be great if you added shelves/aisles, tables, etc. and maybe a bit more decoration

but it has a nice potential, nice job

Edit:
I just now saw you have those already, so here is my fixed reply -
I think the shop has too much space, try to decorate it as much as you can, to make it look more appealing

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How can i decorate it more and what props should i use to decorate it with?

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Hm, maybe put shelves, desks, stickers such as ‘50% sale’,etc, maybe add a carpet

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Progress:






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Not bad, but it can do better.

Feedback:

  • The lights are too short in my opinion, try making it longer.
  • The spotlights are too big compared to the louver light.
  • Try making more different-shaped shelves.
Examples

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  • Add some decoration outside the gift shop.
Examples

  • I’m not sure about here but I think any reference to alcohol is forbidden in Roblox. (Correct me if I’m wrong)

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  • In my opinion, the text and textures don’t fit the blast door.

  • I recommend taking inspiration from reference images on the internet.

Examples

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Thanks for the feedback!

This is the full name tag its just for a dummy wont be in the final game.

The game is supposed to be a meltdown freezedown type game this is the topside and incase of the event of a meltdown or freezedown these doors will close the gift shop.

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Oh lol. Sorry, my bad.

I meant the stripe texture and the warning texture in the blast door. It doesn’t fit your building style in my opinion. Try removing the grunge stuff in the texture.

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Progress 2:


(I kept the original danger symbol cause i thought it looked good might change later idk)






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Hey @spydercam500 i guess the build geometry is pretty good ,but the one thing that’s missing which we call the ‘x’ Factor or the attractive part of any build is its colour contrast, vibrant parts.

I mean to say that you should repaint the build .
As you said its a gift shop ,you should use colours like Pink,Yellow.

Add stuffs like Teddy bears and other stuff toys, Chocolate boxes,gift cards, crockery,Flower bouquets and more interesting stuffs.

And To Enhance the effect of vibrance Try increasing the background brightness.

Hope this helps :heart::heart:

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The topside of the game is office themed so vibrant colors wont make much sense.

Props and other things that will be on the shelfs still havent been made yet once they do get made i will give an update.

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