Need help with starting a map

Hi you probably seen somthing I posted and think I’m really annoying but this time I need tips on starting a good map I couldn’t find any video on it so I came to dev forum.the map is for a city game like gta I just recently posted a feedback of my map and they said the streets and terrain was bad.any ideas?

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Hmmmmm I haven’t seen your “other” map, can I take a look so I can give you feedback on what to improve?

Ok I’ll send You the link Vice City (BETA) - Roblox

I’ll be back after I finish taking a look at the “ENTIRE” map.

Alright, I am back and I found 2 problems or more. The first problem is the water, it’s not lined correctly and the 2nd problem is the terrain. Like look at this:
https://i.gyazo.com/d1882628cee54d6c8f4bb5bfd57ee3d0.png
The streets and stuff are okay.

just played and the terrain isn’t exactly aligned so I suggest regenerating it and deleting the previous terrain so it doesn’t happen again.

The map looks great! I like the terrain style and the roads and buildings that were made into the city and most of the buildings on the map.

As some suggestions, you could add more nature and grass terrain on the surface, and especially some street lights.

A major suggestion is to add terrain around the city and tunnels on where the road ends, just like the ones in Jailbreak. :eyes:

Nice work! :happy4:

The city is… surprisingly good so far. I’d definitely cut down on the amount of grass going on within the actual urban area, though – it detracts from the experience. I think everything is well-built so far; it flows very well.

Regarding your topic, for the sake of readability I recommend just getting to the point. I’m delighted to have actually bothered to look at the game but going on for so long without punctuation may not attract as many as would be beneficial.

Good luck with the game – keep at it. :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

I decided to give your map a go I didn’t expect much going on for a lot of the terrain is pretty neat, I think the city is good at the start the terrain isn’t a huge problem I believe that’ll be fixed later down the line - regarding the city itself, I think you have a perfect layout a lot of the objects are there I feel like it’s missing just a few things in the city area that’s something you may want to start working on that’ll improve the overall feel of it.

The terrain just needs objects to make it more unique some trees, bicycle racks, flowers/plants in the city area to make it more like a game your going for. Or possibly other vegetation. In the following picture some of the areas seem to be plain and dull looking, consider making different objects in the city and possibly add some items on the terrain or taller buildings.

Looking at the terrain, it doesn’t look that bad I feel like not a lot of objects or placed on it. Please consider staying to your main thread that you posted if you didn’t get any response you might get some feedback to improve more further. Best of luck on finishing your game project!

The buildings look the same, a bit bland and could use more detail like since It’s night the windows could become neon yellowish. Also next to your free co. box I think you should add some parking spaces ( If It’s a parking space, if not don’t add.) The streets could also use some lights when it gets dark, add fire hydrants and garbage cans it would make the place more city like, going back to buildings they don’t seem to have any doors or windows of them so they just look like huge structures with no real purpose. The ATM by “Vegan Hotsauce” is a bit too low and should be raised higher. Add some cash registers to that place as well, your city has a good start though.