Need help/feedback on a Low Poly restaurant

I found this low poly building online, no idea where the original building came from but it was nice and I wanted to recreate it in Roblox because it looked very simple and unique. I would like some feedback on it or and ideas you can give me to make it better. Thanks


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so it is pretty good just very and i mean very low poly, so i had the idea if you want to make it look more realistic instead of a texture on the roof thing above the door you could put actual 3d bricks or shingles you make in blender or wherever you make your models on it.

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I was going for the low poly style, but I could try to change it up and not just use a texture for that part! Thanks a lot.

Looks interesting. I think you should make a sign for the Text instead of the text just being on the wall. I also think you should add more weeds and different weed models around the building instead of the same model being copied and pasted. Looks great though.

Best of luck.

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Yeah I’m gonna try put different weed models instead of just one copied over and over again. Thank you

Gave it a little cartoony outline, I think it looks pretty decent with it.


Noticed there were no details in some parts and the bricks at the bottom felt a little out of place. Wanted to fix that.


also added a sign

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this looks really REALLY good, i recommend making the text on the sign neon material like a large outdoor light up sign, it also seems like there is a little bit of missing space here
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which you could maybe add a small third (maybe round or triangular) window, or put more text there.
overall though it looks pretty nice where its at, you could also add more windows on this side
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since it still seems a tiny bit empty, you could also add an open sign in the window by the front or next to the front doors (with a vertical sign instead) I also recommend a metal chimney on the roof (sorta like a thin metal pole shape with a rounded knuckle at the top where smoke can come out)
since many restaurants irl have them, if thats not really what you’re going for then its perfectly fine and even as is the building still looks really good. just a few suggestions though but I don’t think anything really needs to be changed that much.

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Thanks a lot, your suggestions will really help.

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