I think it looks good, but it needs something. What do you think it needs?
Answer: Suggested By @Adaks I’m going to be doing a heaven themed homestore, but thanks to everyone else for their time and suggestions!
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It needs some decoration. Both the indoor and outdoor need some detail. If it is a Homestore then add indoor some stuff to sell, plant, or welcome sign. In the outdoor, you should add some trees.
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The following reply is a constructive criticism.
All I can say is that it looks bland. The path to the inside of the home store is just weird, this only gives me the idea of how a path looks like in a Minecraft village area. The use of materials of the home store is just not fitting. The lamp posts along the path does not suit the word “modern”, unless you’re making an old home store which I doubt you are making one.
The environment seriously needs something. It can’t just be left plain green grass. Add some fountains, flowers or anything that suits an environment.
Overall, I don’t like this home store. It doesn’t have a good shape. Please improve soon.
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I like the design idea, but overall it seems to be basic, with not much variety, and would personally encourage you to use textures than roblox’s built in materials, as they’re much more newer and up-to date than the current ones that roblox has going. Your theme at the moment from the images seem to be a old building in the forest from the light colours and the grass, which is not really the way to go. The logo on front Simply Homestore is a bit too bright from the neon, I would lower that by changing the transparency of the text. Pathway should also be improved, by having a area in which you spawn in with a water fountain and a circular pathway to get to the homestore would look better in my opinion. Adding vegetation by the building, for example bushes, trees, flowers…etc would add detail to your basicness at the moment. However, your build ain’t that bad for someone who seems to be just a clothing designer, you have knowledge on how to make things look neater.
I have a alternative for you, as a suggestion…
I’ve checked out your group, and your group icon seems to have a background of heaven - as well as your avatar having wings. Therefore, I would just stick with the theme of heaven, as I could see your new build looking much better, more modern and brighter in the inside. It would look much better than what you currently have here going, as what you’ve built is like the most basic idea, a building on grass - better to get creative and have something based somewhere else than something not really that creative.
Make sure to use references though, it will massively improve your build - go to google and search for, ‘Modern Building/Homestore Exterior’ and choose something that looks nice, and copy it and not rushing making sure everything is to scale by having a dummy on the baseplate.
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I didn’t even think about the heaven themed home store! Thanks so much! I can imagine the marble columns, and golden gates now…
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Hehehe, no problem and good luck! 
Really Nice,
you should add many features like parking, cars, trees etc
Try adding benches near the lights outside. And also try adding bushes around the building. Hope this helps 
Looks a tad bland outdoors maybe a garden?, as well as the fact you can see the edge of the map, what i’ve seen commonly with homestores is fences or gates around the edge but I love it keep on going!