Needs feedback on a boat game

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Warning: the original post was about two cutscenes. Decided to not create an another post.

Hello there!
I’ve been working on a game about crossing an ocean with disasters. It’s a solo project and supposed to be a silly and chaostic game for a few trips. c:
I don’t have any skills in modelling and gui designs, so expect them to look really bad (and map and guis are not finished yet).

Currently, there are 9 disasters: ice bergs, waves, meteors, volcano, alien invasion, tornadoes, whirl pools, underwater activities (volcanoes) and pirates.

I tried to explain what they do, but it turned to be a chunk of useless text, i’m not very good at explaining things like these. :c

There’s tutorial scene (for joining first time) and only 1 boat to play with, but that’s enough for testing i guess.
Oh, and there’s save-able settings and admin panel (labeled as “sink” button) to spawn disasters for now.

Anyways, your goal is deliver invisible cargos to the end, but first, you have to spawn a boat from dockmaster and green mark indicator will show where to go

I would like to see feedback on the disasters, cutscenes and sounds. Criticism and suggestions are considered.
Also, feel free to invite me to play with :slight_smile:

Game link: Delivery voyage - Roblox

Additional

I left a few easter eggs, and i want to show you one of them:
if you click on the shotgun, a cutscene will start

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For some reason, i feel very excited to share this one.

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Looks pretty neat! Keep it up!

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NOO MY GUY BENJAMIN FROM THE HIT GAME ULTRAKILL
#bringmyboybenjaminback

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wow is that the 1000-THR “EARTHMOVER” from the hit game ultrakill #alwayschargebackcentaur
(epic)

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u should add rain event where it rains and water rises or smth or thunderstorm or hail

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Thanks for suggestions, but rain already exists when tornado forms. Water raising won’t be added due to it won’t do anything to boats and the game uses terrain water, hail can be added as a decoration and thunderstorm is worth to be noted.

Edit: I realized you meant rain as an event, but it’s not going to work either way

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u should maybe make hail damages boats or smth but u dont have to