New Character GFX

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#1

Hey yall! Back with another GFX for you guys. I feel pretty good about this one but I’d love your take on it! Thanks.

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Also, I was thinking of making a portfolio soon but IDK if I should. What do you guys think?

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#2

Hello developer brother.
I like the effects you have put on your new GFX: the petals, the rays of the sun, the texture of the clouds, the shadows of the hair.

However, there are a few things I recommend improving:

1.If you look closely the little chain and the logo of the shirt, you will notice that they are pixelated. What corrupts the subtlety of the GFX
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  1. The typeface, at the bottom, does not seem to me the one indicated to reflect the essence of the GFX. Try using another typeface.

That’s it. The rest is OK. I like your style and your creativity. :upside_down_face:

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#3

this is nice! everything is well done, but the chains on the character as well as the shirt logo look pixelated. other than that, awesome!

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#4

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The sun is coming from behind yet it makes a glare on the face? Doesn’t make much sense. You could work on the lighting.
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Also, the hair doesn’t really work well and there is a weird pixelated shadow

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#5

@xXNovaXx8 @QuackingDuckQuack thank you so much for your feedbacks! The shirt logo came with the shirt and it was the only one I could find that sort of matched what I was going for. Yes, The chain is awful, thanks for pointing that out. Idk why I keep it tbh :sweat_smile:. I will improve on these in the future

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#6

I guess it’s because I wanted a way to add some rays to the picture. It just looked alright, I didn’t take into account the logic in it :sweat_smile: thx for the feedback :slightly_smiling_face:

#7

youre doing great on your gfx! keep up the good work :slightly_smiling_face:

#8

thanks a lot! Very much appreciated :grinning: