This is a Christmas Themed Roblox story obby with some sick features such as a plane cutscene along with interesting and unique levels which I would love feedback on. It is a bit of a generic obby until around stage 20 where I joined project and scripted some insanly fun levels to play. If anybody would take some time out of their day to come review the game I’d greatly appreciate it.
Here’s Link: 🎄Get Home For Christmas Obby - Roblox
I played through the obby and really enjoyed it! I thought that the last few levels you worked on were very interesting and added some flavor to the game. I also thought the rebirth system was an interesting idea, especially because not very many obby games have that feature. Keep up the great work!
Thanks alot mate did you have any critiques about the game?
I quite like it. I do get a lot of errors regarding things like the flying carpet. I think perhaps the music should be turned down a bit. Other than that I think it’s pretty awesome!
You could fix gui scaling for mobile players in portrait mode, icons are pretty smushed, and landscape could have some work done too.
The game was really fun, the grammar in the credits could use some work like the capital letters in random places. As a user I found it a bit confusing on what I could step on and not,
like am I meant to jump over the present, walk on the rocks or avoid them, or walk on the white ice just before the hill which killed me.
What I would recommend for this is, a notification after your spawn point happens to tell you what to do.
Lastly other things like the cutscene at the end would have been nice to see Santa come in and place a present, and a fade out if you are about to die, tween between gui’s (you could also put a vertical bar with the option at the top, as it could get in the way of the mobile thumb stick).
I am a very critical person, please don’t get offended by these comments its just my possibly (rubbish) opinion as it is an amazing game just could be a little more polished. I hope it does well
How would you make it so the game is locked into landscape mode?
I agree with you there
I joined the project after those stages but i understand the confusion the GUI is a great idea
No worries always happy to give feedback 
local player = game.Players.LocalPlayer
local playerGui = player:WaitForChild("PlayerGui") -- We grab a users Gui or screen
wait (2) -- It needs a cool down or it will break 2s is enough
playerGui.ScreenOrientation = Enum.ScreenOrientation.LandscapeLeft
-- We set the orientation
Hey you can put this code into a localscript within the starterGui and it should work
This is the documentation for the orientations if you want to try them out
ScreenOrientation | Documentation - Roblox Creator Hub
Small note if this doesnt work please come back to me there may be a spelling error and I haven’t tested it but it should work as Ive done this before
Dw if it’s a spelling error it would be simple. Roblox never had screen orientations a year ago that’s really interesting.
very interesting it’s been around for a while if you use the new baseplate, you get it. But tbh there should be a script automatically in place in the starter gui which has the code I put, like the sky box in a new baseplate it should be a default