New GFX-THE LAST HERO -¿what do you think?

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#1

I hope you give your best opinion on my gfx, it took me 1 hour and 30 minutes thanks

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#2

Can you tell us for what exactly this is for? Any back story?

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#3

I’m creating a story for a friend and at the same time a gfx and this is the gfx

#4

the story is confidential, I just put it in the forum to see what they think or what my mistake is

#5

the grass is going through the sword, might wanna change that. :wink:

#6

good some mistakes I’ll remove it in a while, thanks

#7

The hand to arm limbs look kinda weird, you should fix that too! Good luck on this!

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#8

Hair gets cut off. But not bad; good job.

#9

It’s meh. The flares are too bright. There is noise.

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#10

  • Render cuts off on the top right, specifically his hair
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  • The sky is kinda blinding and a bit hard to look at without wincing, I would suggest making it like a sunset or something where the sky is more orange and gets brighter towards the sun (the sunset would also justify the orange-y lighting the render has, because right now the sky is more pink than orange)

  • The sparks are a bit unnecessary; not sure where they’re coming from

  • I think you have the character on flat shading, because we can see the faces of each object. You can fix this via smooth shading.
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  • The grass itself is very straight, which doesn’t normally happen (there should be a variety of shapes, e.g. arcs or blades of grass wilting or something) especially when grass is that long, like below.
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  • As Slayin said:

Overall though, I do like the lighting; it looks good, but there’s some work that can be done to make this better. Hope you try to improve this; good luck!

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#11

You can improve lighting on the character. I think this would be really cool to have in your scene because many high-skilled GFX-Artists use it. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UQz6AI88jAI

#12

I think this is a pretty good GFX. The hair is cut off, and grass is going through objects, but other than that, it’s pretty good. It reminds me of a GFX I made a few months back.

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#13

Not relevant and offtopic but how did you make the grass. was it in studio or in blender/cinema 4d

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#14

blender friend ok,thanks you,bye

#15

Its pretty good, but the arms and the render head