I got this new logo, I don’t feel like it’s quite finished so I’d like some feedback on what to add and what was made well.
To be honest, I am not sure what it is supposed to be. The text also feels repetitive and the font is maybe not the best choice if it is suppose to be a rule.
Text is there so nobody takes it, should I remove the text? Is it even necessary? I know Dev Forum images show up on google and I don’t want someone to use it. Also, was it just the text that threw you off?
It’s actually very helpful that you didn’t know what it was, because now I know it’s a problem so that’s very valuable information.
Hint hint it’s a duck, do you think it would look a lot better if teeth were added?
spahgehtee’s reply is kinda funny, but besides from that I agree that I am confused at what I am looking at. You said it is a duck, and I can see that now. I would recommend putting fire in the background so it outlines the shape of the duck’s head.
Maybe part the beak a little, and add some teeth. If you do you can add fire to that, coming out of his mouth. That might obscure the mouth/teeth/beak or even the face, so I would say if you put the duck’s head on an angle to the left or right in the image, you could get a semi- profile shot of the duck’s head and fire coming out of his mouth.
It’s gonna be a smaller image so the fire coming out of the mouth probably won’t be seen well, but the other ideas are a good idea. Yesterday I was thinking of growing and sharpening the fire coming out of the nose to look like horns instead, and adding the sharp teeth like you said. Not sure if I need the background though, most profile images are round except for the one at the top of groups, but it might be worth it. I drew this example image of what it could look like:
starting to look much better. i know it is an example image but if you have symmetrical, well-defined teeth it will look better.
looking at it now you could improve it by adding horns. i know ducks dont have horns but i dont think accuracy is what were aiming for here. i still think adding fire would be good.
Where would I put the horns and fire?
My bad, maybe use you’re username so if anybody finds it hey could refer back to you. I wasn’t trying to sound rude or anything it’s just that I was pretty confused.
You didn’t sound rude, don’t worry. Do you have any suggestions on how I could improve it so it would look better though?