Hello!
I made a new map for my game, Chocoblox Factory Tycoon and I would like your feedback on it! I’m going for a bit of a low-poly/cartoony feel with this map.
You can see it here: CFT Map for v1.0.0 - Roblox
These are some pictures of the map
I’m also remodeling the machines in the tycoon, you could also give feedback on that! I’m trying to make them look kinda like real life chocolate machines, but right now they kinda look too simple.
Very blocky, Not much color, add textures from texture packs, remove the fog
I just feel like it’s all separated. The assets look fine but I recommend making more to make more to fill it up.
The map for the most part is very plain and flat with just a few trees as it’s decoration. I suggest you add a bit of terrain to give your ground height variants and a bit more decoration.
Those are free toolbox hills and trees, or inspired by robuilder. Which not a problem or “Bad”
What jumps out at me firstly is lack of personal style development, if you had developed your own style you wouldn’t have to copy other peoples or use toolbox in any other way then reference.
The problem is not that you took models, or copied/remade someone elses work, the issue is you aren’t using there work in the context its meant to be used in. These hills were made for someone else’s artstyle his/hers hills/borders work well within their artstyle. They are much less boxy.
I have a video covering these point 10 minute mark i talk about consistency:
Anyway my recommendation is have the hills literally be 2 parts, green grass box on top and dirt box on bottom, stack and alternate, also make the tree leaves boxes. to make them look “worse” makes it better because it fits the context.
To be honest it looks a little bit empty. I would add some more trees or decorations like @sidthesuperkid87 and @TenBlocke mentioned. But other than that, it looks really good!
@lolgamerpro456 @TenBlocke @sidthesuperkid87 I added more hills (not border hills) and it kinda looks out of place but how does this look?
Already looks better to me, great job! Maybe add something else than trees? (like rocks or add some more paths or small buildings)
Looks much better! Though I recommend adding more geological features like dirt areas, lakes, etc.
