Yeah, hopefully it doesn’t 
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It seems like a nice game that many kids would enjoy, though I myself am not really a huge fan of tycoon games (unless you are talking about theme park tycoon which I find myself really enjoying).
I would say it is well-made, however it is still like the average tycoon game and lacks originality . I think you should try to add a twist to it to make it seem original.
Overall, I’d think it would do okay. My estimate is that with proper advertising, you could average around 150 - 500 concurrent players.
Good luck getting your game out there.
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Thank you very much, i am going to put 25k towards ads and sponsors!
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I checked out you game, and its actually very good! Tycoons has “evolved” into simulators, and simulators are a lot more well-built than tycoons. This game is very nice, very well made, but perhaps you will not get popular since tycoons have died. The map is made beautifully. I have a few comments.
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For the red arrow, it looks like the text "extra is a little bit shifted right.
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For the blue arrow, the + image seems to be shifted down.
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For the black and green arrows, I would suggest making the “330Z” and
“1805” larger, or in a different color, so it stands out more.
- Your gamepass images don’t quite fit the style of a “cartoony” game
Otherwise, your game is off to a spectacular start! Keep up the good work, and I wish you the best of luck!
P.S. I made it on the leaderboard!
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Thank you a lot, i will keep in mind of what you said and update the game!
Thank you! – DevMaxRBLX
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Overall the concept is really good, but there’s a lot of models that seem out of place. As I mentioned, there’s some swords on the ground that are nearby spawn with barely anything surrounding it, I also saw there was a red jem that I couldn’t pick or nor use. I also saw that you could easily get out of the map, because some areas did not have invisible walls, which caused me to see a baseplate at the bottom below. (See screenshots below)
Here’s the things I noticed,
Saw baseplate below
I don’t know if you can notice this, but the hills surrounding the island are floating.
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Alright, this is awesome! I really like the fact that you could spot these minor things which can lead to big problems! 
I will fix those problems and also the gem is just for fun! As i really like gems, i just put one in that you can kick around xD
Thank you So much for spotting these mistakes!
–DevMaxRBLX
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Well, to say the least, I’m very impressed! 
I can’t imagine this not becoming very popular in the future! I’m a massive fan of classic tycoons, and these kinds of games just inspired me to become a developer.
I’d personally love to see a soundtrack to this game just to put the icing on the cake. Or, maybe when you are on the Ninja side, you’d have traditional Japanese music playing, and when you are on the Saber side, you’d have Sci-Fi or futuristic music.
Anyways, I love the creative liberties taken into account when making this game! The currency isn’t “Cash” or “Dollars”, instead it’s “Zen” which is very unique and creative in my opinion.
I love the idea of “Ninja’s vs. Sabers”, as it’s really quite excellent and not very common.
Anyways, I love this game, the building style is amazing, and I’d like to encourage you on your development journey! Creativity’s the limit. 
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Dang, thanks a lot. We have decided to add music to our tycoon to give it a final touch !
Thanks for the feedback and i had to think of something unique for my first game so here it is!
I am planning something way WAY bigger, which me and @mhty5 are going to eb working on together!
Thank You SO Much! 
–DevMaxRBLX
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No problem! Glad I could help 
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Game Has officially been released!
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Hey one problem I found after testing this again. The music keeps on restarting.
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Yeah, The music is supposed to keep restarting. Thank you for repying! 
No, I meant that it keeps on restarting before the song even finishes, unless that is meant to be intentional (even though I don’t get why it would)
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Oh, its the copy of the music that i placed in the game itself.
Also, you may want to check your leaderboards. I made it on there, left, rejoined a new server, and it wasn’t there. I waited another 24 hours, and it still didn’t pop up.
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There was a datastore error, i fixed it 30 mins after launch. But some servers didnt have the new version.
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I think there is a limit of seconds an audio has. I’m not sure how other scripters make it (since im not a scripter), but I’ve tried to add music to my own game. It had the same issue and when I did a little bit of researching, it has a limit.
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That limit has nothing to do with scripting, but the audio instances themselves.
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