This looks very cool and I love the style of it!
Some tips:
- Don’t have similar colors for the shirt and the background it looks blended in
- For his mouth his tongue is the same color as his skin (Or I don’t know if that’s a tongue or not)
- The eyebrows are a bit high and look like it is apart of the hat
- The face is very centered while you have a lot of room to work with. The eyes, mouth and chin are so close, maybe try and spacing it out a bit? Unless you were going for that look.
- The dimple above the mouth or just a seam in his skin kind of looks like a whisker. Maybe consider changing the color to black.
- I’m not the best with lighting so correct me if I’m wrong but the light is different in all place. The light I thought was suppose to come from the left of the picture but then I noticed the hat was all bright which doesn’t make sense to where the sun would be. On top of that the hat has the sun at the top of it. So where is the sun? (Top, in front, to the left)
- This might just be me but I’m not a fan of the bright pink outline around the black dots on the seat. It just makes it look kind of weird.
Other then that this art style is very nice and anyone would be happy to have this as a piece of art. Great work! 