Hi guys, I made a new song and I would like constructive criticism about it.
Please be harsh if needed, I will use it to my advantage.
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This song sounds great! It’s unique and cool for Roblox! Great job on it! How long did it take to make this song? What game will you use it for? I rate it 9/10! It sounds exciting! What do you make music on?
Took me about an hour.
Battle music in my upcoming game eternal frontiers.
My Chromebook, mainly for my game.
What could be improved?
It sounds very good. Great job!
One thing I would recommend is changing the ending. It has the same music for a minute, and then it just stops.
I think he meant what app you used to make this music.
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Soundtrap. I know I know, but I’m just a teen I don’t have access to stuff like FL Studio or Logic Pro 
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I think the initial melodic line doesn’t have too much movement, and could use some larger “leaps” between notes. That could be improved by moving the pitches up or down of some notes.
For the rhythmic element, I think it is cutting through the mix a little too through. Normally you’ll have those elements middling in the background.
For the drums, they don’t have enough transients to punch with the snares, or that there is a lack of hi-hats/shakers to complement the lacking energy of the mix as it currently is.
For structure and anything beyond that, I think this should be a doable piece of work. Though because of the previous statements, it is slightly difficult to ‘anticipate’ the sections between. There are ways to improve in this aspect, but we’ll get to that later.
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