Hello. Almost a week ago, I made a topic about my first build, a subway train. I listened to some feedback and improved it. Heres the game: https://www.roblox.com/games/5148618477/Subway-Train-Showcase
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Nice job! I didn’t see your last topic on your original build, but I can say it looks significantly better. There’s a better use of textures, and it also look more realistic with certain elements you added, e.g. more poles near the subway doors, the windows, and the light in your train. Looks like you put a good amount of effort into improving the build - keep it up! 
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Thank you! 30 charssssssssssss
Ive seen your first post before, and the improvement is way better! I suggest setting the material of the train hull to metal, and you might want to make those windows thinner. Try making the poles also metal. Otherwise, great job!
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It’s small improvements… Try to look at a subways windows and copying that. The handlebars I suggested look reallyyy simple. They don’t work as well because handles should be coming from the roof for the standing people. As I said before, you should add ads and whatnot. Also it seems you made the subway bigger when it should be smaller. If you’re going for an extremely simplistic subway then you’ve got it. gj
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Thank you for the feedback! 30
Alright, I’ll improve it more. I appreciate your advice!
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