New three models of cars!

Hi everyone! After a while I finished making other cars, using some of the suggestions you gave me earlier I was able to improve a little bit. I hope you like them!

(All models together)

Now, photos of each one separately

(Cyan Bus)

Bus01.PNG

Bus03.PNG

(Lime Car)

LimeCar01.PNG

LimeCar03

LimeCar04.PNG

(Brown Van)

SDcar01.PNG

SDcar03.PNG

SDcar04.PNG

Note: Some things like the two leftover doors of the bus or the sloping roof of the green car are for an aesthetic reason.

To finish the post if you want to leave a suggestion that you think would help improve the models and vote for the car you think is best!

Which is the best
  • Cyan Bus
  • Lime Car
  • Brown Van

0 voters

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I like these vehicles, although I feel like the truck and the sedan are too tall. They’re almost the same height as the bus! And the bus doesn’t have much windows on the side. I would add more windows to it and it would be good! But this is still a pretty nice model.

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I have a question. Have you programmed them? They seems very cool.

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Hello again Anto! At the time of building them and taking the screenshots I hadn’t thought about the size of the cars, thanks for telling me! And regarding the bus, I will try to use your idea of adding more windows, thanks a lot really!

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Hi Az! Every car was made in Roblox Studio, and thank you for your positive feedback!

On the Brown Van, I think the height of the front part is a bit too tall, and the back part is too low. I think you just need to fix the heigh of one of those. Anyways, I really love the cartoon vibe! :smiley:

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Thank you very much for commenting, I had not noticed that detail! I will try to fix it next time.

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The windows are way too tall in relation to the bottom portion of each vehicle.

The barrel on the orange truck doesn’t fit very well; I think you should raise the side parts on the back of the truck so it doesn’t look like the barrel would fall off.

Also, the back window on the orange truck doesn’t look right due to being far shorter than the other windows.

Apart from those points they look decent, and I’d like to see what they look like should you improve them based on this feedback.