Newest Commission, Looking for Feedback to improve on


C4d, Photoshop user.

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It’s amazing, detailed, and perfect for what I believe you’re going for. But I think the green fireball thing in the top right is a bit out of place, idk though. Also, I think the logo should be a bit larger.

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Overall, it is very clean. The one thing I’d suggest is to blur the green fireball so it would look distant and wouldn’t catch the audience’s eyes as much. The humanoids(?) in the orange armor look very nice but I personally think that a background with them coming down a spaceship would look more nice. The humanoids(?) seem to be appearing from space, if that’s how they are appearing I think it would be better if the bottom of them is more like / and coming from a single point rather than just having them not show. I’d suggest using perspective so they look bigger and more imposing as well. Thanks for reading. Also friend me on discord, Jack#9646. Thanks :smiley:

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Sent a request, Will#6300
Need 30 characters so reeeee

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wow, it looks amazing! the colours look really nice. ^-^

i’m not very knowledgeable in gfx, but i think it’s hard to focus on the guy holding the white sword (i have to try really hard to make out his pose). maybe make his figure a bit brighter? or reflect more of the orange light in front of him onto his body?

but it’s really great!

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