Hello! I made this one for a commission. Personally I do think the view outside of the window is kind of odd. But what do you guys think is good / bad in this graphic, so I could improve further!
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I like how everything is 3d, but I think you should have added depth of field to separate the subject from the background. looking good tho 
I think the view outside the window is fine. The only thing that you could work on is the lighting. You can add light facing the persons face from the laptop. The brightness can be low since there is light coming from the outside.
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