Give me an opinion from my work and give me suggestions what to add here.
https://www.roblox.com/games/5098002968/Lonely-Island-Showcase
https://www.roblox.com/games/5098002968/Lonely-Island-Showcase
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It looks like a survival island with fog to give it the natural and epic tone. It look awesome, but I think that you should expand the borders and add more islands with different variants of terrain and matter. It looks great though and I think you should keep it up!
It looks alright, it’s definitely a good start. I feel like the open space in the water could be filled with other islands, add more depth into the terrain things like palm trees and other vegetation maybe a boat washed up on shore could add a nice addition so you could add the extra details to it. rocks, variety of trees, bushes, plants ect.
In the following picture it’s a good looking island, but I believe once you finish the whole design it’ll look nice overall this little part of the terrain is a good start this is just something you could take or use. I’ll definitely use this image for an example or as a guide when placing objects to your island.
Here are some ways you could improve your building:
- Add more trees
- Different species of plants/flowers
- Variation of land/terrain material such as (Mud/Grass/Rocks)
You have only used leafy grass and sand + water - Expand the ocean/sea/water size (REALLY optional)
- Shadow maps is already on I see, but maybe you need to get rid of the fog or maybe recolor it
- Use Sun Rays
Overall it’s really great good job on the progress you’ve done!
This looks good! Try using the paint tool for grass to make it not look like its chunky! Also try changing some terrain properties, and see how that looks!
It’s very empty, the water moves really fast for some reason (which it shouldn’t if you’re going for realism), and the sun can be very overbearing, really bright for some reason.
The grass to sand blend looks really uneven and rushed. I would said make the island smaller, or add more . A lot can be fixed. Definitely add some better lighting! It’s super foggy.
kinda copied from my showcase but it looks cool!
It’s nice, but the coast is a bit lumpy and undefined. The transition from the grass to the sand also needs to be fixed through more delicate terrain painting. It’d be nice to add some rocks and patches of dirt. Also, since it’s a tropical island, you should probably decrease the fog. Good luck on improving your showcase!