I am making a few logos to put in a portfolio for hire, How could I improve this one?
It feels like its missing something, what could I put into it?
The GFX is definitely above passable, but my biggest critique is the text will probably appear too small to read because of the size of roblox game icons
the one thing I would say, is that the main character is too big.
the text covers their head, and the feet almost clip out.
I would recommend you make it slightly smaller to fit better.
also the stars might be a bit too blurred.
but other than that, awesome logo!
Edit:
“you know you are finished not once you have nothing left to add, but when you have nothing left to take a way”
The stars were intentionally blurry but it does look off
That looks much more inviting, maybe adding a border around the edges would look good here as well!
A backround with some stuff would appeal to me more. Maybe claw machines, countertops, and/or phushies in the bakcround.
It’s cute. Maybe you could change the background to something your game represents, or a brief view of what your game will be about.
Yo should make both the text and the character bigger. You can do this by putting the text over the char’s legs and lower part of torso.
Also add more contrast between the text and whatevers behind it. Do this by changing colos/adding shadows/etc.
The game doesn’t exist, its an example of an icon I can make.
Wow I would love a Thumbnail for my game like that but I only have 7 robux which is hardly enough. 
I’m trying to get a few examples for a portfolio so if you allow me to put it into my portfolio. sure. Just dm me on discord what you want on it.
[EDIT]
Forgot to link my discord
Coz#0001
People who have used devforum for a while, is doing this here ok?
It was an idea of a game I thought of months ago but a script went wrong so I scrapped it.
You have a good eye for design, but I would suggest opting for something far simpler, such as simply the letters “PS” in the foreground and an object that represents your game lying in the background. This is because, especially for ROBLOX groups, logos like yours can become difficult to decipher the contents of. Remember, group icons are only 150 pixels wide on the group page and a mere 50 pixels wide on the group list. Try resizing your icon to be 50 pixels wide and see what I mean.
Just realised this is a game icon. In that case, your logo is passable, but some detail will be lost, such as the small faces on the lettering. Game icons are 150 pixels wide, but as can be shown below, a lot of detail can result in the background being cluttered and indecipherable. I’ve done you the favour of resizing it so you can get an impression of what it might look like. Beware however that it would probably look worse than this due to compression.
I will keep this in mind, Thanks for your suggestion!
I think this is actually sellable
Is 500-1k a good price? or should I go higher or lower?
I give the GFX a 9/10
Pretty amazing 
The Text is pretty basic. Try changing the Text Position to somewhere down I guess.
Also here is a tip it’s better to use a background like this
Many games use this design. Sun Ray Lines in the background. These make the logos look professional 
if you don’t know how to make one just reply to me on DM
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