How does it look? It is in first person by the way, hence the chair isn’t really well done.
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I would suggest that you should show more images of your game. Otherwise I think (based on the image) that you should try to add more texture/ detail,since it looks quite simple.
Yeah I see, the thing is the place is very dark but for the benefit of the people seeing it, I made it brighter. That’s kinda why I decided not to include too many items and made it look quite empty.
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I’ll show you some rooms, could I have some opinions on what to put here by the way, as I’m really baffled. I don’t really understand what to put here.
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Again I’ve included lights, but in reality there will be none, there’s a camera GUI which when you click space, a light appears.
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I recommend trying blender in order to create your models. They look quite off to me.
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Those aren’t mine, but yeah, I’ll try that.
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Thanks for your opinion! 
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I am not a fnaf fan but I think that you could benefit from adding more details, maybe try to add a texture to the walls. Also maybe try to polish your monster models as they look quite off.
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Then again, it’s quite dark and the models won’t be seen that well.
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Yeah I’ll tell my friend (who made those models) to make them look a-bit more concise. Thanks for your feedback.
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As in the monsters/animatronics.
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You can either make them look better in blinder, or make them look more bit styled, for example other fnaf characters in roblox
I see, I’m currently on blender right now, I’ll tell how it goes! Thanks man, I appreciate the time and effort for reviewing my game by the way!
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I like the set up but if I were you I’d got for a more eerie lighting set up to capture the feeling of a horror game. Maybe some grunge textures to add wear and tear on the tiles?
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Yeah, good idea. I really appreciate your feedback. I’ll try and get some good textures maybe from blender. Thanks man.
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not to advertise, but u should take a look at my project fnaf project (still in progress) - Roblox, u can contact me on discord if u want to discus or if u have any questions. donblake#0001
Not to discourage you, but to make you aware of your competitors:
There is a really well made fnaf game out there. I think its called Fnaf : Support Requested.
But as for your build. It looks alright. Maybe a little more detail like what @coolagrabben4 said.
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I disbanded that ages ago lol. I’m a UI designer and stuff now. I also invest.
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what do you mean, are u no longer working on that project?
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