Opinions on some of my builds so far?

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This is a small clothing store for a town, kinda empty in terms of clothes since i’m not too good at making those lol
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This is a house I’m trying to make, furniture is a lot more difficult than the exterior so it’s kinda empty lol
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This one is a totally different building style, but it’s supposed to be the spawn location for a game, with teleports to the tutorial, singleplayer mode, and a gamepass shop

So yeah! I don’t really have much work yet but any feedback is welcome!

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#2

The first one is kinda bland. Try adding some shape and more structure. I also suggest using different textures. Overall good start!

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#3

For the first photo of the inside of the store, I would add support beams on the walls or merchandise on the walls, just to make the wall have more decorations. And I would add more decoration to the outside of the building as well. Because the walls look kind of flat. If I were you, I would add little bricks on the wall to give it more decorations. But all and all, it’s pretty good!

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