Opinions on this atmosphere/Terrain?

[KristinaMoment (Kristina)]

I just want feedback on how to improve this.

I’m aiming for a desert/dust cloud scene that looks pretty much apocalyptic.

[ComplicatedParadigm (Food)]

Honestly it’s a bit too orange. When I think of dust clouds I would expect it to be a bit more difficult to see, so less sun is visible.

[A_SquaredAnimations]

Looks too orange and hazy depending on what you want. If you want to make it look like an atom bomb just went off, it looks fine, although make the sun less bright since all that fog is obscuring it.

[KristinaMoment (Kristina)]

@ComplicatedParadigm

When I think of dust clouds I would expect it to be a bit more difficult to see, so less sun is visible.

@A_SquaredAnimations

If you want to make it look like an atom bomb just went off, it looks fine, although make the sun less bright since all that fog is obscuring it.

Yes! I’ll dim the sun then.

This showcase is called “Report Card” and I want it to be an abstract visualisation of getting a disasterous report card from school, so that’s exactly what I’m looking for!