The build is meant to be simple, not a lot of details, I just want to have opinions on this on if its good or not, maybe a little bit of problems I could resolve. (sorry if this is bad its my first post)
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in my opinion, you’ve used the space well for the outline of your room, it’s simple but really well placed
i really like the zigzag you have on the wall, it really screams out modern – since you have that maybe try changing up your color theme a little bit (totally up to u, just suggesting it)
i can totally see this being put into a house, nicejob!!
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I’m not a builder, but I think adding decorations would help, like plant pots and books on the shelf, a chair for people to sit on, and add a floor. But yeah overall it looks nice.
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good suggestion, ill probably do this, thanks
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I would suggest adding more height to the build.
As aforementioned, the shelf on the wall is modern, however, other designs you have used in the build does not follow the same idea. If you are going for a modern build, change the material, colors, doors, tables, etc.
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I’d say it looks great for a simple build (sorry I don’t have much to critique), nice job. 
I am not a professional builder, but I just want to state my opinions and views on this with my own knowledge. If you find this offensive, I apologize, as I don’t have any harmful intention or aggressiveness meant to you.
I’ll start out with the positive points before the negative points(My opinion):
Pros:
- The clarity can be seen(By setting the contrast to lowest, so we only see the dark and bright parts of the picture). And overall the color won’t mix together even if you change the hue. For example, from the picture below, I will definitely focus more on the shelves and items on the shelves on the board and the shelves, other than on the other parts of the house.
- The interior design is neat and organized, there is a style to it
Cons:
- Just like what b_ryve said above, even though the design of the shelf looks modern, the others are not really. The color scheme is also kind of weird, considering wooden walls that looks like it’s a wooden urban house, and the marble-textured counter-top that is red colored, not to mention the white colored desk in the corner of the room. The counter is fine, but the table looks off due to the size & color scheme, it doesn’t look like it’s from the house
- The modern colored table & the modern structured shelf, I think using white color for the shelf would be fine too, or at least something that looks more “modern”. The shape of the shelf is modern, I’m not saying you couldn’t customly make a non-modern color shelf, but it looks off especially beside a board and table that are both white colored, and something you would usually see in a more modern place
That is all, thank you for reading this opinion, I hope you are not offended by it, I wish you the best of luck on this build.
heres actually the full map I created using this build, it isnt done yet
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The scaling of the house is definitely doable for R6 avatars, that’s for sure. It looks like a pretty good home.
Idea: The board of notes could be an interface for receiving missions, update logs, or other information.
The full map is just absolutely incredible, but this time I will keep it short
Pros:
- Color scheme is well-thought-out, nice job
- Theme of the map is interesting
- The flickering lights & pipes adds to the environment and makes it more immersive
Cons:
- The CritSword is unanchored, remember to anchor it back
Other than that, nice job, I look forward on playing your game, it looks visually great, can’t wait for it!
Wow thanks, I really did work hard on it
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