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#21

This is an updated version without the apples and changed the tree colours for variation.

https://gyazo.com/da2c7b8784d72708dce3b3826a791708

#22

It looks very nice and apt! Keep up the good work.

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#23

It looks amazing so far and Iā€™ll try my best to contribute suggestions that havenā€™t been already said:

These two treeā€™s styles donā€™t seem to match:
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What I mean:

  • One trees branches seem to be made of cylinders and one seems to be made in blender or something.

  • Also Iā€™m not sure if you planned this but the two wood on the two trees are different colours.

  • One other tip is to play with the lighting to make it seem more cartoonish.
    Example: x.com

  • In my opinion this rock doesnā€™t really fit in with the rest of the rocks:
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Hope some of these suggestions help you. Congratulations on this awesome build and good luck in future builds.

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#24

Iā€™ll adjust the assets to have a similar style to the rest of the build so it can match more. Thanks for also showing me an example of lighting, iā€™ll mess around with the lighting to make the build more cartoonish.

Thanks for the suggestions! :slight_smile:

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#25

Iā€™ll adjust the trees to make it fit to the build.
Thanks!

#26

I honestly donā€™t see why you removed the apples. They were a fresh spark of colour among what is now a dull monochromacy of green.

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#27

Iā€™ve already re-added the apples, I think they add a lot more contrast to the trees, and to not make it look bland.

#29

i LOVE lowpoly builds and just looking at them. They are so nice to see.

The only gripe i have about this is the bridge, too curved. Otherwise I love it!

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#30

Thanks for the compliment!

As others and you suggested, Iā€™ll adjust the bridges curve. :smile:

#31

Looks good, but the walls or mountains would look better if it is smooth not flat.

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#32

One thing, I like the trees! It gives off a Paper Marioā„¢ vibe.

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#33

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Hi, firstly I want to say Great Lobby! The low poly looks great! I love almost everything. The bridge feels kinda outa place in my opinion. Maybe if you made it look less 2012 it would make a difference. Another thing about the bridge is that there is a little piece miss aligned. Those are my only comments tho!

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#34

You did a good job looks like you used Blender here! Awesome job with that looks like you understand the basics of Blender. My only concern is you reused the same asset multiple times to a point itā€™s obvious. Try resizing the meshes some on x,y,z axis. Furthermore the bridge stands out as being to over arched. I would recommend using a plugin like Archimedes V2 by scriptos on Roblox Studio to get a nicer looking arched bridge. If you cannot figure out how to use Archimedes V2, just check out some tutorials on it on YouTube.

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#35

No problem, Iā€™ve adjusted the bridge and made it less over-curved. :smile:

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#36

Sure, Iā€™ll get used to using Archimedes V2 as well as blender. Thanks! :slight_smile:

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#37

Awesome! Good luck to you on future endeavors! Yeah, Archimedes V2 is a great plugin for making things like roads and bridges on Studio.

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