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This map is for a simulator that I am getting close to finishing. I made 6 ones so far. Feedback is wanted!
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Spawn:
Zone: 1
Zone: 2
Zone: 3
Zone: 4
Zone: 5
Zone: 6
Thx to @LuaBearyGood for the pet pack btw 
Zone: 1
Zone: 2
Zone: 3
Zone: 4
Zone: 5
Zone: 6
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In my opinion, the shops can maybe use some windows. That is the only thing that got my eye, everything else looks very nice!
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Here’s a couple of ideas for you: everything looks so flat and bland. Maybe add a couple little hills or uneven terrain in the arenas. Maybe some textures for the ground would do good too. For the main area with the shops, maybe a fountain or some more decor like plants or more rocks for the area, it’s very plain.
Overall, I would add some sort of texture and more decor in the empty spaces of the map to make it look better.
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I agree, windows could be added to the buildings to improve their overall look.
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The more I look at it, the more I realize that zones 3 and 4, and 5 and 6, look almost identical. In zone 4 the snowmen get angry, and in zone 6 it turns kind of volcano - ish. maybe add some more diversity
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I really like the zones, it reminds me of texting simulator but in my opinion you’ve done it better.
Those low poly meshes look really good and it gives the world a cartoonist feel.
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If you look at the spawn area, you can see that there’s a ton of empty space.
I have an idea which can possibly help:
Teleporters:
You can place down teleporters to the different zones that when you first enter the zone you unlock the portal to it, however, you could sell this as a gamepass if you wanted to, an example of which would be in Bubble Gum Simulator:
Hope this helps
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I would say it’s pretty nice love the use of low poly building 
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Similar to what other people said, just wanted to add on.
The spawn area I noticed looks pretty bare, flat and plain. Also I noticed that the entire map is one straight line with no dynamic layouts. Maybe add a curve to the map here and there, make it turn.
Overall good start, keep it up!
The spawn of the lobby is very bland, and you should add teleporters or something else. At least put more things in the lobby to make it more detailed, also it looks like every single simulator and doesn’t really have that much uniqueness to the map.
Wow. The different sections look so amazing, the only thing I would suggest is to change the bit where the shops are they look out of place in my opinion
Overall looks stunning, but the first region with the shop looks really out of place for some reason that I can’t put my finger on. Compared to the rest it looks very visually unappealing.
Good work though!
In the sandy region, I think the sand is a little to bright. I think it should closely match the rocks due to there being a high contrast between the two objects at the moment.
Hope this helps!