Hiya! I’m a new developer with 1 week of experience, I have read some of your suggestions on the first part, and I’ve already finished the Cafe, but I really wanna hear your feedback on it, so I can change things up if needed.
I hope you like it! Feedback and suggestions is needed.
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I can’t belive how good you are for only building a week!, This looks really good. Keep it up dude!
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Only building for a week…? CAN I HIRE YOU???
But seriously, this is great. SO detailed! Amazing job!
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Thank you for the feedback! f3x made it alot better to build.
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A week?! This is amamzing!
The only suggustion I have is try and make the tree leaves a little less round.
Alrighty, I’ll try to use decimate to lessen the vetrices on blender, as it is made in blender.
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That looks like every cafe in roblox + 1
Really really really really good! 
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I’m going to say no…
…on changing anything of course! This is perfect!! Even my developer friend loves it! Keep it up!
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This looks AMAZING! However you should maybe change the floor texture color or texture entirely. The color doesn’t fit with the rest of the build. I would also maybe add slight rotation to each chair to make it look like people have dined there. Other than that WOW that is epic.
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This looks amazing, however, I noticed that there’s quite a lot of detailing and parts on the roofing area, which could render in funny on lower graphics settings and devices. A quick fix for this is adding a blur, and setting the size between 1 and 3 depending on the level of detail. This is called aliasing.
Overall, the build looks great, especially for just 1 week of experience!
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This looks outstanding! Coming from a solo developer building a cafe myself, this is absolutely beautiful. Keep up the good work.
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The build would be more interesting by placing small features on the walls or ceiling to cast interior lighting or whatever approach your wanting.
For example, an cafe normally featured circle lighting to cast down lighting curtain times of the day if your cafe has a night cycle the build would still have those warmer colors to intense the design a little more, such as if you were going for a morning circle it should still feature chandeliers or smaller lighting placements.
Overall love the modern style implemented to the cafe you may want to experiment with different light placements or interior decorations if your wanting a decorative cafe. Have you tried placing small little cafe art instead of leaving sorting areas bland, like in reference photo?
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Its amazing! But i have an idea! Maybe if you want you can build a bridge to a nice park?
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wow this is incredible! One week? I’m not nearly this good and I’ve been building for almost a year! Incredible build, you should be super proud of this.
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dude…ONE WEEK!!! this is absolutely INCREDIBLE keep up the nice work and oh I can image how good of a developer you will be amazing job dude!
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Looks great, however there is a lack of design in certain areas such as the roof and counters. You could add lighting and maybe tip jars on the counters. Some other designs you can add
- exterior mountains can have an island area
- more lights on the outside of the map
- Maybe more tree designs and small shrubs
- Moving into the interior, I would add carpets leading from the door to important areas of the game for example the seating area or the counters where people order food.
- also can add candles or small napkins on the tables.
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It’s good but you know what makes it even better? the fact that you only are in for 1 week, good luck with future builds I see a bright one here
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Wow! Only in 7 days? This is crazy! You have so much talent! Lovely build! WHoever buys this or you sell it to will be extremely happy!
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Yes, I was hired to build this for 300 robux.
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