Greetings! As a builder to get commissions, I’ve recently made a showcase to show commissioners what I can build and such. This is my first build ALMOST done. I just need some feedback on what I could add, change, or anything that I could possibly do with my build to make it stand out more. Thanks, and here’s some screenshots of my build along with the actual game link.
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Hello👋 @slendzeman! I’d like to congratulate you first on the exterior of the cafe itself, great work👍! It was well built BUT the outdoor area could use some improvement.
-For example, lighting settings that compliment the build would be something you can improve on.
-One thing I noticed immediately was that the time of day seems to be night time but the lights are off, therefore I would suggest setting the lamp part to neon with a color that isn’t too bright but just right.
-The detail on the side is well done so great job on that!
-The sidewalk should flow, there shouldn’t be a random break in the outer part unless you were attempting to create a cracked sidewalk. Which I assume not so this might want to be fixed.
Lastly, the border part that cuts off the cafe, I know its just a border but adding a nice background that compliments the cafe would be great!
Overall great job on your first build!
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Thanks for the feedback! I’m going to make a couple of these changes either later today or tomorrow.
I like the dark design but you should add light effects.
Hi! Very nice work. But did you purposely low poly the trees because of the limit…?
I didn’t make the trees as those were free models from a whole nature pack I found on the toolbox. If you were meaning to ask me this question, although accidentally replying to this other person on the Topic