Gfx I made using the plane
New fixed GFX
Front view of the plane
Side view
Back view
This is my first large passenger aircraft. Please tell me everything that is wrong with it.
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The wings look a little short for the scale of the plane.
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Looks good, but the windows on the front of the plane are not transparent enough to be a window.
The lighting looks a bit bright for some odd reason.
I’d suggest that you lower the lighting a bit for the plane, what I think would look super amazing is that you add a lightning strike coming down from a corner of the image, you can find a lightning strike in google images or you could create a cool effect with Adobe Effects.
You should also add some clouds in the background with rain coming out of them.
Also, for the lighting with the lighting strike. If you do add that, try to focus on the lighting for that, only a small part of the plane will have a lighting color of the strike so as well with the shadows.
I also agree with TRUST,
and so as well with the plane windows, like PoisonFish said
For the watermark, It doesn’t really matter what font you use but I’d suggest that you use a cool cursive type font for the watermark.
But overall, it looks pretty good. 
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I’m not very sure how to make it translucent.
It looks pretty decent overall, but I would use smooth shading for the majority of the actual plane seeing as you seem to be going for a more realistic approach and some of the edges look rough.
This looks really good! Nice work
as a Pilot this Red Tailed plane model is Boeing 787 / B787 .
Wings are short and this makes to plane stall. Make it longer.
The bottom of the tail seems to not be smooth as an actual aircraft. But, as you said, it’s your first GFX plane you built. Overall, it’s pretty good!