So I have made a quite small pet adopting place where you pet animals. this is made for a “lobby” I am making that revolves around animals. please give feedback! This is only my 2nd build, and I tried using other shapes than just rectangular prisms.
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Looks a little too blocky. Perhaps vary up some colors on the walls and divide them into parts. Also possibly make the ceiling a different color and material.
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For me, the colours clash a little and i’d recommend adding some small decorations. Perhaps a potted plant/tree somewhere in the room, or a poster of some sort. Looks pretty good though!
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I agree with that, also, you should try to use a color pallet from online to stay with because the tables color doesn’t look too normal to me.
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Hey! Nice build but I have some feedback:
The Television
The T.V. Lacks detail aswell as shape. You should make to more 3 dimensional because by hiding form the picture it looks flat. The buttons also look weird, they’re on the bottom and sticking out, like a keyboard, make them flat instead!
The Light
The light is just square, making it looks nice won’t hurt! So why don’t you make into a nice modern celing light, for example look at bloxburgs celing light:
There are probably some better ones there but this is a good example.
The Walls
I feel like you should also change the wall from a brick red to somewhere more calmer and peaceful. Like an nice wall like this:
As you can see it’s a simple wood design.
Overall, your build is nice but it could improve on the details listen above! Have a good day and good luck!
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The build looks good in my opinion from the screenshot you have taken. However, I do see it lacks a lot of detail it’s just a few things that you could improve that could make the build look better I would try using other materials/textures instead of using just one material.
As said above, I do agree that the building looks a little to blocky. You should change the brick material to a different one because it doesn’t quite fit within the build I would try adding some textures on the walls or possibly choose another material like wood, smooth plastic, etc. Try to expand into more colors that you could add on the walls you could also look at some (Pet Shelters), to see how the interior looks like that could give you some ideas.
In the real-life model, the building has a couple of decorations in the interior and on the walls you could try adding some posters, pictures, potted plants, animal signs, and more. You should try placing a few of these details around the building just to make look better maybe it would add a nice finishing touch.
I really appreciate the way you built your 2nd model, but to be honest, the brick material alone would leave the store a dull appearance. I’ll leave an image below so you could get some ideas to add to your building. Overall you’ve done a good job building this.
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The color is very bright and clashes a bit with the TV stand also. Ususally building don’t have brick ceilings so you might want to change the ceilings material.
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Well to be honest, your pet store’s interior based on the image is good. I really like the brickwalls you have made and the descent furniture placed there. Though I have a suggestion, the interior roof should not be bricks in my opinion, it’s better to make your interior roof color white because if the interior’s all bricks it looks a little bit dull in interior design.
Well, in all, you did a descent job in making this type of interior and hope you keep on improving this.
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What material do you suggest I change the roof to? Also, I haven’t finished decorating yet because I will add mire benches and flower pots and stuff like that. Thank you for your feedback!
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It looks alright!
One thing I would like to see is some windows at the entrance of the pet store, this would make the pet store look less cramped and closed off.
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I would have to say, the use of bricks is a bit too much. I recommend you to switch up the colours and the texture. Or, you can try a more animated/ cartoonish design that would make life a lot easier. Also, why are they no windows, this kind of reminds me of a prison? 
But it is pretty good rn as a second copy.
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Overall for a start it’s decent, but try to add some variety in building materials, as well as some details to the walls. A simple painting here and there or a book shelf would add much needed life into the build. Also, the lights could be alot better, since it’s a pet store try doing more commercial lighting, like seen in this photo.
finally add some support to the windows, it would look alot better.
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