Pizza Restaurant Game Feedback

Help and Feedback Creations Feedback
#1

I have a pizza game where you serve custom pizzas to customers and run your shop. Pretty simple.

I ran an ad campaign for a low cost to test the waters and I didn’t make a ROI, perhaps my monetisation is wrong? Please chime in if you have experience with ads!

I’m looking for ANY feedback possible to help improve my game to the max. Please don’t hesitate

Here is a brief summary of what it’s like if you want a teaser: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/mIzBbGMKvPo

Thank you very much!

3 Likes
#2

Hey! I played for a little while and I really enjoyed your game—I love restaurant games so I was super thrilled to see this post, and TJ’s Pizzeria did not disappoint.

I have a couple suggestions that I think might increase visitor playtime:

  1. I think the tutorial at the beginning should go into a bit of detail into how a pizza is made, even if it’s just a picture of the pizzamaking process. Whenever I play a game that has a handbook, I generally don’t go out of my way to read it, but if I’m prompted to do a tutorial I usually will.
  2. It’s kind of hard to see the speech bubbles from the customers if they have crazy accessories, so maybe you could use GUI to display the feedback during the cutscene?

Your game is super charming and I am definitely a new fan!

1 Like
#3

Thank you, this feedback is so valuable and I’m very very happy you like it :smile:
Btw, the customers glow green/red depending on if the order was successful. But I will take the advice on board nevertheless!

2 Likes