Platform Dash Run!

Hey, so i made a speedrun game inspired by speedrun 4 and some other games, i would like feedback on how to improve the game and make it better so that people could play it.

note: i used a few free models because i dont know how to build.

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first of all…

THE LIGHTING, you NEED to make it DARKER as it may HURT some player’s EYES and cause them to LEAVE your game, that’s a major problem.

WHEN YOU DIE, you spawn OUTSIDE of the map, so you CANT retry!

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Oh yeah, don’t forget a thumbnail because that’s very important.

But first of all change your lighting this instant or your game will fail 100%.

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Also, I would consider making the ui better, I’m a beginner - intermediate UI designer so if you want I could design some for you (I’ll make it inside my place and show it to you and then if you like it we can add it to your game)

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It’s pretty good. Definitely learn to build simple things, because the environments look inconsistent, and then you could revamp the freemodels with your own creations. Also, turn down the music. Try implementing a leaderboard, and then adding coins to collect and some sort of point system to make it more interesting.

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I’m gonna keep asking you to make the lighting darker until I see a response

And also fix the bug where when you die you cant retry you keep spawning in the void

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I would suggest adding some VFX, and some nice UI, catchy things those are…

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Dude you gotta chill out. It’s not like he spends all his time making his game, he’ll probably come back and see it in due time

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Hey…

Your game could use some improvement, I would be happy to design some ui and bug fixes for you!

I think this game has potential, and I don’t wanna see it wasted.

Don’t trust me? That’s ok.

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Wrong category. #help-and-feedback:creations-feedback

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