- The music needs a separate volume control as it was too loud on my PC, so I can only turn down “all” the sounds volume which makes it difficult to hear the sound FX.
- While in 3rd person, you still have the 1st person walking bob active.
- Accessories are not hidden in 1st person view making it difficult to see where you are going. Screenshot examples below.
- You can’t get past the very first area because you can’t pick up the key to open the very first door, so I was stuck.
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what do you mean you cant poick up the key… prompt not showing? or script broken
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I’d actually go way darker. Don’t see anything wrong with it. May just take time.
If I was to say anything it would be I really didn’t know what I was doing or what the goal was.
I assumme it was to just progress.
Unless it was a PC issue, the E key would not pick up the key, first door when you start a new game.
for me it works every time. are you on mac? you might wanna switch to windows
what is that thermonuclear explosion on your head for
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Immediately after joining i see a few flaws. Because think of it this way, why would somebody play this game rather than just playing doors? in order to make a unique experience, you should have at least some type of differences to make the game more of its own thing.
The lighting seemed to be my biggest aesthetic issue, I very much recommend using Future lighting and spending more time on that type of look.
Id also recommend changing up the lobby. The main game seems to be built much better then it IMO, so why not the lobby?
I hope you can find these tips helpful in success of your game. Good day!
we are currently rebuilding the lobby from ground up.
ABOUT THE LIGHTING:
I hear its bad aall the time, but we are using future. i do not know what we are supposed to do.
there is a lightbase surfacelight over the entire room to give a base minimul brightness and then each seperate lamp with shadows disabled.
Here are some examples of horror - type lighting that i’ve created. My suggestions:
Use PointLights and SpotLights mainly for lighting. Surface lights are sometimes okay. Keep most brightness settings on lights fairly low, not low to the point where it’s hard to see, but low to where it just looks nicer, such as 0.5 typically.
These are some really good light settings to use in indoor-style horror games.
Also, be sure to set the TimeOfDay to night time. It helps much even with indoor environments.
A higher density atmosphere can also do wonders.
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I just tried it again, works now. No idea what it didn’t before.
QOL testing. 
I always check to see if a developer hides accessories in first person view or not. Some players have so many accessories on they can’t even see where to go in first person. 
its bland
I did another playthrough a few minutes ago, and I just now noticed that you don’t receive the rooms key when it was bought from Jeff’s shop. It takes your coins but doesn’t give you the key in return.
so what you are saying is i should use atmospheres?
also i am having this super weird bug with a tool for no reason… this is extremely annoying
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uh… well okay thanks i will look into it
oh okay… but it looks goofy yaknow?
You are in luck (all of us), Roblox is finally going to fix this in core code. No mare hacks for us, so this won’t be an issue for you in the near future. 
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Players leave games and dislike games that look crappy, heres some reasons yours looks crappy
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HD ADMIN
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No custom Hotbar
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Looks like all assets are stolen and you just copy another game
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The tablist
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The advertisments and horrible coding
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Your entire game is pregenerated, Doors is generated as you go with some rooms being pregenerated, such as room 30, 50, 100.
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Honest feedback from a normal player
Want to put a quick disclaimer, as I am sure you are great person, this is simply my honest opinion on the game. Take this as criticism to improve your game and don’t take it to heart. If you truly want to make an amazing game I guarantee you have the potential to do so, just understand games take time and effort. It’s whether or not you are willing to put in that time and effort it takes to make a game. Wish you well, take care.
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Everything feels like stolen assets, free models, or just completely unoriginal.
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You basically just took doors and made it worse.
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The music is okay but quickly gets annoying.
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Random models that just feel completely out of place or look awkward.
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Loading UI looks like a free model.
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Screech is just a goofy PNG with a prompt, in fact all of the monsters look poorly made or just PNGs from google.
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Everything feels extremely rushed.
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Entire game feels like an attempt at a cash grab.
This was literally the first thing I saw when going down the elevator…
For context, your entire game feels like a complete rip off from doors. Just with random levels and poorly scripted models, Some UI looks good while others look completely out of place, when the first things you see is the weird loading screen and HD admin it immediately makes everyone assume this is another trashy cash grab trying to be the next doors when putting little to no effort.
Please, if you are going to make a game and want to know why everyone is leaving it. Do not add models and assets that make the game feel rushed, poorly made, and a cash grab.
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