Please give me feedback on my story game!

https://www.roblox.com/games/5641289524/An-Unreasonable-Adventure-Story?refPageId=298f1a2d-7f97-431b-b980-5b3766d7e2b8

Managed to make this game with less than one year of developer experience lol. This just shows that anyone can make a story game. Any feedback will be appreciated!

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It looks pretty cool! Allthough I should say that the icon or thumbnail seems pretty similar to the story game “Break In” and it may probably do some copyright reasons.

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