Please judge my showcase that I have recently finished and tell me what I can improve on

Hello
I’ve just recently finished a showcase and i would like to ask for opinions on it it what I can improve on and how to avoid studio bugs.

Here’s the game: The Room... - Roblox

I made this entirely from scratch.

Here are 2 quick pics that I took of it:
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robloxad2

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