Pls give me feeeback on these pics

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#1

Hi I made this pics on my phone please rate them :slight_smile:

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I used ibis paint x and roblox ok since i cant go on pc and make some randon dumb game and i was bored @DavidNet22

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#2

GIVE DAVID CREDIT FOR THE IDEA OF MAKING ART ON PHONE :wink:

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#3

Here is my feedback on your art work!

Image One: I like the outline of the character but I like the character’s outfit even more. The light blue overlay is a good color scheme for the chosen outfit.

Image Two: This one is even better, the hair, shirt, pants, and color overlay all ties together perfectly. I love how you matched the hair and the outfit together.

And best of all, I love how you drew the faces on the characters.

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#4

I don’t think asking for a ‘rating’ is allowed, just feedback (ratings may be considered spam). I like them, especially knowing they were drawn on a phone. I think the background shadow/outside drawing shouldn’t clip over the character, and on the first picture, maybe make the mouth black instead of the light blue. Pretty good for a phone, did you use an Apple Pencil or a finger?

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#5

Asking to rate is considered spam on this forum.

instead of asking to rate you could ask for feedback or “what can I improve?”

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#6

Very nice GFX ( I think that’s what it’s called ) you’ve made, I like the cartoony faces you’ve drawn! Feedback:

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There is a “Avatar” on the character, I’d suggest you to try removing that.

Also, as mentioned, asking people the rate your creations is against the forum rules, please change that!

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#7

I dont how how to remove it :sob: 30charrrrssss

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#8

I like the idea of drawing the faces onto the characters!

#9

Well, if you have a phone you can try downloading an Eraser program that erases and blends the remaining color .