Here is a logo/thumbnail i made today, what do ya’ll think,
What are your suggestion’s.
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Looks good, but I recommend searching up “Most Popular Popsicle flavors” and changing the Popsicles in the thumbnail to the most visual popsicle you see in your search.
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I love the overall concept and design. However, I suggest that you make the background much more vibrant and eye-catching.
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Nice. However, I would recommend using another font for the logo. The font makes it look odd.
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Things I recommend fixing:
- Font doesn’t really match theme
- The shadow on the bottoms text is different than on the top text
- The reflections on the popsicles are both in the middle which looks a bit weird
- I’m not sure if the background was meant to be neon green but it kind of hurts my eyes and I’d recommend changing it to something more appealing
- The text isn’t centered in the bubbles you made for it
- The colour of the bubbles the text is in doesn’t quite fit the rest of it
- The purple of the popsicle is a bit too dark
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I would suggest changing the fonts to a more detailed font, also I would suggest adding some more layer styles to your text. You may also want to try and add a gradient to the text itself. Also, the background is not very eye-catching, I would suggest a scene from the actual game as the background. Keep it up!
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This Popsicle looks odd;
Maybe find an alternative flavor to replace it.
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It seems a bit odd, I would change the font and capitalization on some letters. It would be better to make the brown unified and maybe a different colour. Looks great so far! Keep improving!!
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I like it. Though I wouldn’t do that much of a drop shadow for the texts. You have a bevel rectangle for the center area - I think that should be more of a poppy pastel color because brown isn’t really the ideal color - assuming that it’s kids who will be playing this game. Good work on the watermelon and popsicle!
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Thank you all for your feedback
I wonder why it was flagged as inappropriate.
I didn’t see this post until now, but it’s most likely because you didn’t actually offer any constructive criticism/feedback for him to build off of.
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Looks good although not up to the mark, I made a free logo for you, which I think is okay to start with, If you like it feel free to use it.
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Hey, I hate to be that person but a game with that name already exists and is fairly new. I worked on it myself.
https://www.roblox.com/games/3344424870/PETS-Popsicle-Simulator#!/about
I have no issues with others creating the same concept of course, but it’s always a good idea to do research on whether your chosen name idea already exists, as naming a game after a pre-existing one can cause confusion or in some cases (mainly with larger games) could cause legal issues. I wish you the best of luck though with the development of your game! 
EDIT: I didn’t realise this thread was 21 days old already, sorry for the bump.
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That looks nice! thanks for the feedback, nice work!
Thanks @Dysche for the feedback, and its logo was just something I made its not for a game, but thanks, I really like your reply 