Hi! I am Cxany. I am an animator, builder, scripter, UI designer and game designer on the platform. Currently, I am making a portfolio. Sadly, my only builds are very outdated and I can do much better than what is shown in them. That is why I am taking 20 days to make 20 creations with my best effort. Daily, I will update this post with my new creation until the 20th creation gets finished. Then, I will make my building portfolio and my commissions will officially be open.
Feedback
The point of this whole thing is to get feedback of what I can improve on as a builder. I am looking for some general tips and advice. I love criticism, please use as much criticism as possible! It really helps me while I am building. Thank you!
Why do I have a feeling I have seen this somewhere?
Oh I know. deathrun discord server
Anyways, the hallway look cool, but there could be more details in some parts.
Firstly, add some props. This could be anything such as a plant, or painting (or if you just making the hallway look creepy add moose heads lol)
The lamps could be decorated a little more.
While this is great, it lacks purpose / depth behind it. The hallway doesn’t show any evidence of what it is used for exactly / where it might be / when it’s set, etc. Small details like this can greatly enhance the depth and create a space feel ‘real’ and ‘lived-in’ per-say. When designing the hallway / space initally, think about where it could be, what it’s purpose, etc.
Haha, it was just supposed to be a fancy hallway at first that I was going to test my animations in, but I decided that I put too much effort that I would actually make this some sort of a showcase.
Anyways, thanks for the feedback!
