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#1

Hey! Thanks for reading.

I’ve been recently interested in the Roblox myth Banland (which is essentially Roblox hell), so I created a build of a dark corridor leading to a gateway to Banland.

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The design is a mix of Roblox’s different building styles, from using the old studs to importing meshes from Blender for other types of structures. Any feedback is welcome, but I’d love to hear how I can make this room feel more menacing.

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#2

i sure think its about the lighting, make it darker red.
i also have a feeling that the guardians (i don’t have good vocabulary) should be also stud-based, make it either a statue (on a podium) or a custom holding animation

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#3

I think a fog effect and a little blur would fit here.

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