Rainy Days - Showcase
Hi, i’m Bloomsita. 
I created a small map to showcase and have feedback about my creations! 
Time spent: 3-4 days.
About the game: It’s mostly to show the terrain, but there is a small house too.
Here are some photos! 
Any feedback is highly appreciated, have a nice day! 
Update 1: I changed a bit the house. 
This is super cute! I like the terrain design a lot.
Maybe try adding some more trees and change up how they look, adding diversity in the wild is important!! I would also suggest adding rocks in different places so it’s not as strange that they’re around the house and that’s it/ The wooden house design overall, interior and exterior is really fitting with the surroundings, however I would try adding more pink into the world so that the inside doesn’t stand out as much!
Overall this is really cool, and I think it could be 10x better with a few improvements!
Aka a house about 2x the size of a Regular ROBLOXian (Not sure if it’s cause of perspective or not)
I think this was 3-4 days well spent! The lighting, style, and design behind this looks really great! Maybe you could implement a Rain-Like effect as well to make it feel more simulated to your title perhaps?
Very nice showcase regardless! 
“Small house” yeah, nice lie. It’s a house for tall robloxians.
Seriously though, this is well built just from the screenshots, loved everything about it.
Just a suggestion though; maybe you should add door knobs/handles to the doors, that would make it more realistic then just pushing it opened.
It’s a great build overall!
I kind of like it, but it isn’t detailed.
What I dont like
The walls need a lot of work, use references.
The terrain is bland, and could use blotches of mud here and there.
The trees are free models.
The rocks are free models.
The light in the room I believe I have seen as a free model.
The roof on the house is too thin, and needs tiling.
The windows are bland and need detal.
What I like
I like the theme, and how you pulled it off
I like the interior for the house
I think you should change the flooring and wall colors in the inside of the house (to make it match the furniture). Other than that it looks amazing, nice job!
Thank you so much! I’ll do it
Thank you for your feedback! I really like to have different opinions on how I can improve, so thank you so much.
No problem! Show me the finished product when you make the changes you like.
DO I SPOT FREE MODELS?
In the case that do not, this is a very good showcase.
Looking decent so far.
I would suggest adding more details on the terrain part it lacks overall structure consider adding some bushes, flowers, pathways leading to a garden or house. It appears the interior looks quite dull. Adding more decoration props could achieve a more define the scene. The trees add a great addition, I expect adding another variety of tree to have. It’s own style without being repetitive.
However, the overall environment feels alright depending on what style of house you’re going for throwing paintings - picture frame wall shelves could improve it a bit more further. Other than that it’s good, but adding little more wouldn’t hurt!
