Here is my ad, it is not final and I need your opinion.
(Ignore the “Made by baseparts”!)
Is there anything that you’d change about it? It could be colors, font, or anything/everything.
Let me know!
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The CAM1 in the bottom left corner is too noticeable; I would make it a little bit smaller because it doesn’t really match with the rest of the picture.
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I’d charge around 200-250 for that! 
Love the color, would rate it, 9.5/10!
Do you think it would be okay to fully remove it? I would have to find something else to have at the bottom though because it’s really plain without it
How did you get that name???!?!?!??!? 
It looks really nice, but if I would change something, I would change the character’s pose. I feel like the way he is running right now looks unnatural and maybe using a more realistic pose would make it look even better. Otherwise, great job!
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I attached the wrong picture, ignore the deleted response
ive done some slight adjustments, does this look better?
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You should make the watermark smaller or just remove it in general, it becomes the main focus of the gfx besides the other text and it sort of ruins the ad. Overall pretty good though!
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thats just for the purpose of posting it on devforum, so no one could steal my ad if they wanted to
It looks really good! Basically everything you need in an ad.
The things I would improve is that I noticed there is this shadow on the left of their head.
It makes the perspective of the person look directly next to the building which I don’t think you were going for. Not really a huge deal, but details make a huge difference. Also just my personal opinion, but I don’t think you should be right next to a burning building.
Also, if you don’t use blender or another 3D editing software, I would suggest learning one because it boosts the quality a ton!!
Good job! Hope this helps (:
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