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Hi! Thankyou for reading this! So i have recently made a few designs that i would like to show you!
First one is this! I made it like 5 mins ago tehe


The second is this! I made a speed design on it so go check that out! Speed design- Cute off-shoulder top and jeans - YouTube

The last is this one! I also made a speed design! Speed design | Cute heart crop and jeans - YouTube

Please comment on what you think! I will be a big help to me :heart_eyes:

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I think your designs look amazing! On the first design, I suggest you blend the black outlines in order to give the outfit a more realistic look like the others, but over all I love all of your designs! slight_smile:

Thankyou for your feed back! I was just trying a shading technique that i just came up with a few minutes before!

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Maybe change the outline to a darker green in place of black. Increase the opacity of the bow to full, rather than transparent. Try making the shading a bit more consistent to the outfit and make the highlights a bit more noticeable.

Try adding texture too.

The shading in between the legs looks a bit off compared to the rest, so maybe fix that. Don’t leave the feet blank and try challenging yourself by making shoes rather than socks. Make the outline of the pants a darker blue, instead of black like the previous outfit. Fix up messy lines on the belt and make the heart buckle smaller as it seems out of place due to its current size. Make the highlights on the skirt less noticeable as it looks like white patches everywhere. Add more detail to the ruffles.

Again, try adding texture and more details.

Fix up the pixelated lines on the top as it makes it look messy. Reduce the amount of highlights and try blurring or smudging them as it looks too sharp. Fix up the lines on the belt and avoid using pure black so you can shade it to add more detail. Don’t make the outline pure black, instead a darker shade. There are some inconsistencies with the highlights so that will need to be fixed.

Overall, it is quite nice. Some areas you need to practice and learn further are:

  • Lineart
  • Colour theory
  • Shading and highlights
  • Clean lines
  • Further detail
  • Texture

Feel free to message me on Discord or forums, I’d be happy to help you learn these things and improve your designs.

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I will keep that in mind! Thankyou for your feedback :sparkling_heart:

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The third is by far my favorite, I don’t know why though. Probably because of the shading and color? Well, either of those, it’s still cool! I think you did a good job on this clothing!